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Lunatia
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PostSubject: the story of Magical Farmer, Cerise   Fri Mar 21, 2008 7:35 am

hi! it lunatia here...
i'm trying to make a story of my own creation of harvest moon story..
(ps:i'm still learning english, n i know my vocab n grammar is worse, but i hope u guys will enjoy it)

chap 00, the prologue is coming soon



please support this story by giving ideas or opinion


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PostSubject: Re: the story of Magical Farmer, Cerise   Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:06 am

oh. just Like my writing??? But your a baker....how can you be a farmer???
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PostSubject: Re: the story of Magical Farmer, Cerise   Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:59 am

Luna is the name of the main chara of this story..
( i cant think of other name at that time, since i always prefer to take boys name as my ID and username, Lunatia is the only original name i made.)
its completely different person from me..(and its not me)
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PostSubject: Re: the story of Magical Farmer, Cerise   Fri Mar 21, 2008 12:01 pm

Oh at first I was thinking your name was Lunatia again...
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PostSubject: Re: the story of Magical Farmer, Cerise   Fri Mar 21, 2008 12:45 pm

u mean the real name...??
nope its not...
i dont really like my real name though it sounds weird for me when u pronounce it....
hint for my real name: claire is the other version(the name where the other country use) of my name
i'm not really sure how to explained but its sth like tat..
eg. maria--mary
yosef--joseph
matius--matthew
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PostSubject: Re: the story of Magical Farmer, Cerise   Fri Mar 21, 2008 12:47 pm

oh. wow. Wait. You changed the name again??
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PostSubject: chap 00--prolouge   Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:09 pm

The story of magical farmer, Cerise
Chap 00---Prolouge



On top of a hill, there's a girl named Cerise lying on the ground
seemed very sad, talking to the grave which are just made few days ago..


Today is another boring day.....

I cant live in this city anymore...
coz of my weird power, ppl are afraid of me, they starts to go away from me
this is sad, and yet i'm used to it...

I never know who are my parents...
the only thing i know is i was left behind under this great tree on snowy day, and there's a kind lady adopt me and take care of me, that is the greatest moment in my life, coz i know there's someone who still care about me...

Now, she has left me behind, again alone in this world

then suddenly a strong wind blow and a flyer fell on top of cerise head

"Wat the...??"
*trying to get up and take what is the thing tat fall on her head*

"Hey, wait..."
*grab the flyer and read it*
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Come to the Memoire Village and start a new life here...
No matter who you are and what u used to be
You can start a new page in this village...
For more info contact xx-xxxx-xxxxx

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"hey!this is what i need..!!!"
wew, it seemed somehow the wind has help me again....

Then she sing a few sentence of sweet song,
and something glowing starts to come nearer to her...
it has wings, and very pretty little creature...
they are nature fairies...


"Hi my little friends...
I know u guys are the one who bring this to me..
thx very much...i guess i'll take this opportunity and leave this town."

The fairies starts to go nearer to her as flying around as if they understand what Cerise said.

"Thanks guys...i know, this will means goodbye to u guys
and i know, nobody in this town can see u guys nor talk with u
but, i need to find somewhere i belong...
i'll miss u, my friend..i promised i'll come again..."said Cerise with sad smiles

[i]A moment after Cerise smiled,there's a little fairy which glow silverish-blue tying to get closer to her and then it tickles her so that shes cheered up


"Ha..ha..aww...
stop it! It tickles a lot...
I know what you mean, u want me to cheer up right??
Alright, I will then..!
Thanks my little friend"

then she kissed the little fairy and it kiss her back on her cheeck


to be continued.....
(please comment to help me improve)


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PostSubject: Re: the story of Magical Farmer, Cerise   Sat Mar 22, 2008 4:29 am

hmmm...you did good. But, you should of put capitals but it's not that big of a deal.
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PostSubject: Re: the story of Magical Farmer, Cerise   Sat Mar 22, 2008 5:18 am

hehe, thx..
its the 1st time for me to make stories...

i'll edit it later...with capital letters...

hehe...
(hope everyone is here for cooking fest.)
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PostSubject: Re: the story of Magical Farmer, Cerise   Sat Mar 22, 2008 5:20 am

(Well we don't have to be all online. We just have to make everyone here today at least.)
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PostSubject: Re: the story of Magical Farmer, Cerise   Sat Mar 22, 2008 5:33 am

(hey, tats really cute....maybe its still early...
lets just wait)
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PostSubject: chap 01-the arrival   Mon Mar 24, 2008 9:33 pm

the story of Magical Farmer, Cerise

chap 01-the arrival

after days journey from the city to Memoire Village...
the scenary is so beautiful, the range of green coloured mountain and some of them is covered with snow on the top...
green forest underneath the mountains and some grape vineyard around there is really looks amazing...


i can see a small houses around..it seemed tat we're almost here...

TING TONG TING TONG.....(the bells rang)
the captn speak from the microphone:
thx for choosing this ferry as ur transportation to Memoire village...
we'll have another trip every 2 days..
to check the schedule please contact the office at memoire village

then cerice brings her bags down and sit on the bench, waiting for the chief of this village to come and show her the new place..

Yey!finally i'm here in memoire village..
this village is beautiful place and still very natural..
i wonder if i can meet fairies here...

half an hour later.....
there's a young man, about his late 20's came,wearing a loose t-shirt with jaket tight on his waist, and wearing a blue colured jeans..
the man is half running,half walking,looks like he's out of his breath,waving to Cerise


hee...??is he waving at me??do i know him??
asked Cerise in her mind

the young man stoped right in front of her and take a deep breathe...

"sorry, i was late...i woke up late and my alarm is broken...
i hope u dont mind..."he said quickly and then smiles at Cerise

Cerise is still confused, trying to figure out who is this young man...
He seemed very friendly..then she take a look again at him
His hair was red,with eyes of hazel...Tall,and handsome..

"Hey,Cerise are u listening to what i said..??"asked the man again..

"owh, sorry, sorry, i was a little bit tired coz of the long trip to here..
and i dont mind u came late..btw, how do u know my name??Do i know u somewhere of have me met before??"Cerise ask still in a protective tone and still trying to figure out who is he..

"Ah, Cerise, you forgot about me already???its me...."


[i]to be continued


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Who do you think the young man is??
-the village chief? -cousin??
-old friend? -childhood friend?
-boyfriend? -brother?
-just a random guy -etc?(please comment on the post)

i'll try to continue the story tnite(since i'm not suppose to online and do this during school hours)
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PostSubject: Re: the story of Magical Farmer, Cerise   Tue Mar 25, 2008 3:50 am

I think the man is Cerise's future boyfriend. Right now friend I guess.
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